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the many words in our language that have dubious value, two particular
words stand out: particular and particularly.
means ‘‘of or belonging to a single, definite person, part, group,
or thing; not general; distinct.’’1
So particular—or its ugly adverbial partner particularly—is
used to signal that whatever is being written applies only to the person,
part, group, or thing modified by particular or particularly.
But when you write in the singular about a person, part, group,
or thing, it is unnecessary to use a modifier, in addition to the singular,
to specify that what you have written applies to only one person, part,
group, or thing.
these examples, all taken from Michigan appellate opinions:
ease of reference, we will also include the page number in citing a
must this courtesy be extended only for a particular subsection?
Does particular limit the courtesy to just one subsection? How
about this: ‘‘For ease of reference, when we cite a subsection, we will
include the page number’’?
respect to this assertion, it seems evident that whether a hospital’s
negligence must be shown by expert testimony depends on the circumstances
of the particular case.’’
court is clearly talking about one case. The context and the use of a
singular noun make particular unnecessary: ‘‘It depends on the
circumstances of the case.’’
would, for example, be inappropriate to conclude in a retrospective
fashion that merely because a particular plaintiff, in fact,
suffered harm or even severe harm, the condition at issue in a case
posed a uniquely high risk of severe harm.’’
we’re talking about one plaintiff—and the singular noun plaintiff means
that we are—then why not just say plaintiff? Why must it be the
particular plaintiff? Is there some other nonparticular plaintiff?
is especially troubling when used after any. Look at these
trial court has discretion in determining the number of points to be
scored on any particular variable provided there is evidence
on the record that adequately supports the score.’’
‘‘Defendant does not challenge the lack of evidence with respect to
any particular elements of the charged crimes, but only the evidence
identifying him as the person who committed them.’’
‘‘Our review of the record reveals there is a lack of evidence regarding
the public necessity of the drain, especially due to the fact that plaintiff
failed to provide any particular evidence leading to a conclusion
that the drain was for public benefit.’’ [This is a bad sentence
it not have been enough to say that the plaintiff did not produce any
evidence? What is the difference between evidence and particular evidence?
How does an element differ from a particular element?
to R. W. Burchfield, particular is
used for emphasis, esp. after demonstrative pronouns this and
that (he didn’t like that particular tax; in this particular instance)
to the point that it has attracted adverse comment (‘an unnecessary
reinforcement,’ ‘can often be left out, to the benefit of the sentence’).
Up to a point such criticism is just, but it should be borne in mind
that there are some contexts, esp. (but not only) after a negative,
when the adjective supplies legitimate emphasis (e.g. He had no
particular reason for being there as far as I could tell; She didn’t
write that particular essay but many others just as good).2
in the two examples Burchfield gave, what about the negatives justifies
any emphasis? By writing that ‘‘he had no particular reason for being
there,’’ the writer is saying that not only did he not have a reason for
being there, but there was also not any single reason for him being there.
Why isn’t it enough simply to say that he had no reason to be there? And
by writing that ‘‘[s]he didn’t write that particular essay,’’ the writer
is emphasizing that the essay the writer is referring to really is the
same essay that the writer is referring to: ‘‘See,’’ the writer says,
‘‘this one! This essay!’’ But we already know that that is the
essay the writer refers to because the writer wrote ‘‘that essay.’’
What about that is so difficult to understand that it must be underscored
and emphasized with particular?
in the Burchfield example is a demonstrative adjective; it differs
from the in that it points out something rather than just
singling out something.3
So when one uses that particular, one is pointing out that one
has pointed something out. Is this necessary? One commentator said, ‘‘Particular
intrudes (though perhaps more in a certain type of oratory than in writing)
as an unnecessary reinforcement of a demonstrative pronoun.’’4
It seems to make little difference whether that particular follows
a negative; with all due respect to Mr. Burchfield, the reference to a
negative seems arbitrary. An unnecessary word is always unnecessary, regardless
of whether it follows a negative.
adverbial form—particularly—can be just as sloppy. It suffers the
additional infirmity of being an adverb in the first place. (Stephen King
has said, ‘‘I believe the road to hell is paved in adverbs, and I will
shout it from the rooftops.’’5
More examples from the Michigan courts:
plaintiff claimed that defendant misrepresented that the subject property
would not be transferred to the Tigers (the Ilitch family), who apparently
were particularly objectionable to plaintiff.’’
‘‘Olsen has never been particularly clear about what major life
activity his back injury affected during his employment with Toyota.’’
‘‘Courts should be particularly skeptical of business plaintiffs
who—having negotiated an elaborate contract or having signed a form
when they wish they had not—claim to have a right in tort whether the
tort theory is negligent misrepresentation, strict tort, or negligence.’’
each of these examples, particularly is used as a qualifier or
intensifier to affect the meaning of the adjective it precedes. What does
it mean to be ‘‘particularly objectionable’’ or ‘‘particularly clear’’
or ‘‘particularly skeptical’’? It seems that by using particularly,
writers often intend to signal some sense of degree; the word might
be replaced with very: the family was very objectionable;
the witness was not very clear; courts should be very skeptical.
But these qualifiers add little to our understanding: ‘‘Rather, very,
little, pretty—these are the leeches that infest the pond of prose,
sucking the blood out of words.’’6
To the extent that particularly means very, it shares the
same infirmity, only with more syllables to muddy the pond. If a qualifier
is needed, very or especially would be better than particularly;
they’re clearer and shorter.
has other meanings, too. One might say that a person is particular,
meaning that the person is picky. Or one might say that one objects to
a proposed order only in some of its particulars. Particular is
not always to be avoided, but when used as an adjective or adverb, it
often signals the overprecision of imprecise writing.
Webster’s New World Collegiate Dictionary (4th ed. 1999).
R. W. Burchfield, Fowler’s Modern English Usage 574–575 (3d ed. 1996).
Id. at 772.
Ernest Gowers, The Complete Plain Words 54 (Sidney Greenbaum and Janet
Whitcut eds., 3d ed. 1986).
Stephen King, On Writing 125 (2000).
William Strunk, Jr. and E. B. White, The Elements of Style 73 (4th ed.