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legal writers believe that but, if used to begin a sentence, is
either incorrect or loosely informal. Is it?
But the superstition is hard to dispel. Usage critics have been trying
to dispel it for some time. In the first quarter of the 20th century,
the great H.W. Fowler dispatched an editor who wanted to change a but
to however at the beginning of a sentence:
is wrong[, said the editor,] to start a sentence with 'But'. I know
Macaulay does it, but it is bad English. The word should either be dropped
entirely or the sentence altered to contain the word 'however'."
That ungrammatical piece of nonsense was written by the editor of a
scientific periodical to a contributor who had found his English polished
up for him in proof, & protested; both parties being men of determination,
the article got no further than proof. It is wrong to start a sentence
with "but"! It is wrong to end a sentence with a preposition!
It is wrong to split an infinitive! See the article FETISHES for these
& other such rules of thumb & for references to articles in
which it is shown how misleading their sweet simplicity is.1
Sir Ernest Gowers revised Fowler in 1965, he treated the question with
it is a solecism to begin a sentence with and is a faintly lingering
superstition. The OED gives examples ranging from the 10th to the 19th
c.; the Bible is full of them.2
lingering" is a good description of what the superstition is doing
nowadays. It isn't supported in books on rhetoric, grammar, or usage--though
several try to eradicate it. I do my part in A Dictionary of Modern
and in The Elements of Legal Style4--in
the latter book by quoting two sentences from Justice Holmes’s judicial
Dictionary of English Usage—generally ultrapermissive, but thorough
in marshaling previous discussions on point—found unanimity among
of the folklore of usage is the belief that there is something wrong
in beginning a sentence with but:
Many of us were taught that no sentence should begin with "but."
If that'’s what you learned, unlearn it--here is no stronger word
at the start. It announces total contrast with what has gone before,
and the reader is primed for the change
who mentions this question agrees with Zinsser. The only generally expressed
warning is not to follow the but with a comma....5
we can all agree that beginning a sentence with but isn't wrong,
slipshod, loose, or the like. But is it less formal? I don't think so.
In fact, the question doesn’t even reside on the plane of formality.
The question I'd pose is, What is the best word to do the job? William
Zinsser says, quite rightly, that but is the best word to introduce
I invariably change however, when positioned at the beginning of
a sentence, to but. Professional editors such as John Trimble regularly
do the same thing.7
Baker, in his fine book The Complete Stylist, recommends that writers
choose but over however in the initial position:
Bury it between commas, or replace it with but or nevertheless.
the day had not been entirely lost.
the day had not been entirely lost.
the script that Alcuin invented became the forerunner of modern handwriting.
script that Alcuin invented, however, became the forerunner of
in the book, Baker says: "But (not followed by a comma) always
heads its turning sentence....I am sure, however, that however is
always better buried in the sentence between commas; But for the
quick turn; the inlaid however for the more elegant sweep."9
editors understand the wisdom of Baker's and others' advice. Good writing--formal
writing--—often contains a great many sentences beginning with but
and (a little less frequently) and. A recent front page of
The New York Times,contained a dozen sentences beginning with but
" Pentagon officials said today that they werezprepared to deliver
large amounts of emergency aid to victims of Hurricane Andrew on Monday,
the day it devastated South Florida. But they did not do so because neither
President Bush nor other civilian officials ordered a large-scale Federal
response to the devastation until late Thursday."10
"But interviews with officials at numerous Federal agencies suggest
that there was a breakdown in communication and coordination at top levels
of the Government."11
"After the storm smashed into South Florida early Monday, Mr. Bush
declared a major disaster and flew to Miami to inspect the damage. But
neither he nor the Federal Emergency Management Agency directed the armed
forces to deliver all the aid they were ready to send to storm victims."12
"But the truly radical part of the plan approved by the City Council
this week has nothing to do with burning trash and every hing to do with
"But at least one crucial question remains: Will it ever really happen?"14
"It has been three years since the Council passed the city's first
recycling law, a program many rejoiced in. But most environmentalists
and city officials now agree it floundered about as badly as such a plan
"'Scale is everything in this kind of program,' said John Schall,
a visiting professor at Yale University and the lead consultant on the
city’s new solid-waste management plan. 'And this will have the
biggest scale you ever saw.'"16
"The Israeli-Palestinian conflict is often cast in terms of sticks
and stones and broken bones. But it is also a war of words."17
Israeli references to the piece of land commonly known as the West Bank
now generally avoid the words 'Judea and Samaria,' terms of biblical origin...rejected
"This language barrier may not seem like a major matter. But labels
count, and they often reveal differences in political points of view as
surely as ballots and bullets do."19
"But 'occupied' sounds harsh and unfair to some."20
"But 'settlements' can be a loaded word bo some people, especially
on the Israeli right, because to them it suggests an alien intrusion."21
(someone might say) we'’re talking here about formal legal writing,
not newspapers! I'll answer by quoting from what most would agree is formal
legal writing. In The Federalist Papers,honly the least distinguished
writer--—Jay--abstained. Madison and Hamilton regularly began sentences
with but and and:
"But let it be admitted, for argument's sake, that mere wantonness
and lust of domination would be sufficient to beget that disposition...."22
"The affairs of the Union will become more and more objects of curiosity
and conversation among the citizens at large. And the increased intercourse
among those of different States will contribute not a little to diffuse
a mutual knowledge of their affairs, as this again will contribute to
a general assimilation of their manners and laws. But with all these abatements,
the business of federal legislation must continue so far to exceed, both
in novelty and difficulty, the legislative business of a single State,
as to justify the longer period of service assigned to those who are to
the drafting of the Constitution, Gouverneur Morris's Style Committee--advisedly,
I'm sure--admitted several initial buts, but ifs, and ands
into the Constitution itself. Such sentences appear even in the more
recent amendments. For example:
"If after such Reconsideration two thirds of that House shall agree
to pass the Bill, it shall be sent, together with the Objections, to the
other House, by which it shall likewise be reconsidered, and if approved
by two thirds of that House, it shall become a Law. But in all such Cases
the Votes of both Houses shall be determined by Yeas and Nays...."24
"But in chusing the President, the Votes shall be taken by States,
the Representation from each State having one Vote...."25
"But if there should remain two or more who have equal Votes, the
Senate shall chuse from them by Ballot the Vice-President."26
"‘Full Faith and Credit shall be given in each State to the
public Acts, Records and judicial Proceedings of every other State. And
the Congress may by general Laws prescribe the Manner in which such Acts,
Records, and Proceedings shall be proved, and the Effect thereof."27
"And if the House of Representatives shall not choose...."28
"But no person constitutionally ineligible to the office of President
shall be eligible to that of Vice-President of the United States."29
"But when the right to vote...."30
"But Congress may by a vote...."31
"But neither the United States nor any State shall assume or pay
any debt or obligation incurred in aid of insurrection...."32
"But this Article shall not apply...."33
have much sound authority for using but to begin sentences—even
in the most formal contexts—and no sound authority for refraining.
Writers who insist on recasting sentences to avoid the initial but
hobble themselves stylistically.
from Volume 3 of The Scribes Journal of Legal Writing (1992). If
you have published legal articles and are interested in joining Scribes
(The American Society of Writers on Legal Subjects), contact Prof. Kimble.
1. H.W. Fowler, A Dictionary of
Modern English Usage 586 (1926).
2. Id. at 29 (Ernest Gowers ed.,
2d ed. 1965).
3. Bryan A. Garner, A Dictionary
of Modern Legal Usage 123-24 (2d ed. 1995).
4. Bryan A. Garner, The Elements
of Legal Style 49-–50 (2d ed. 2002).
5. Webster’s Dictionary
of English Usage 211-12 (1989).
6. William Zinsser, On Writing
Well 74 (rev. 6th ed. 2001).
7. See John R. Trimble, Writing
with Style: Conversations on the Art of Writing 85 (2d ed. 2000). (‘‘The
fact remains...that But and And are absolutely valid ways
of beginning a sentence. Not only valid ways, but excellent ways.
And all seasoned writers know it.’’)
8. Sheridan Baker, The Complete
Stylist 305 (1966).
9. Id. at 31-32.
10. Robert Pear, Pentagon
Planned Fast Storm Relief, N.Y. Times, 29 Aug. 1992, at 1.
11. Id. (beginning a ¶).
13. Michael Specter, Hope,
Off the Ash Heap, N.Y. Times, 29 Aug. 1992, at 1 (beginning a ¶).
17. Clyde Haberman, Words,
War and Sensibility: Linguistic Fog in the Mideast, N.Y. Times, 29
Aug. 1992, at 1.
18. Id. (beginning a ¶).
20. Id. (beginning a ¶).
22. The Federalist No. 17, at
119 (Alexander Hamilton) (Clinton Rossiter ed., 1961) (beginning a ¶).
23. Id. No. 53, at 334 (James
24. U.S. Const. art. I, § 7,
25. Id. art. II, § 1, cl. 3.
27. Id. art. IV, § 1.
28. Id. amend. XII.
30. Id. amend. XIV, § 2.
31. Id. § 3.
32. Id. § 4.
33. Id. an. XXII, § 1.